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Tuesday, January 27, 2009

A New Beginning - Round Five

Ok I think I have been too nice to you people - posting 5 parts in one week. So Part 6 is ready but will not be posted until I reach a count of 25 comments on this post. So get cracking people whoever wants the next part. Criticism is welcome


He suddenly backed off with a shocked look on his face "Im sorry I didn't mean to offend you but I saw you were bothered with everyone bumping into you so I thought I would create a shield."

She never thought it was possible for her to blush but she was sure she was turning all colors of the rainbow. She was kicking herself internally for being super confident to think that he was leaning in to kiss her. This guy she met a few minutes ago and in front of T and everyone. How could she even think that he would be that brave or gutsy to make such a move in front of everyone in the middle of a club? All these thoughts were going through her head while she held her hand to her mouth and just watched him laugh.

"Maybe you wanted it?? I would be happy to oblige."

"Shit shit shit" she whispered into her hand - she realized if she was just a little bit more serious and offended then he wouldn't be taking it so lightly. She kicked herself internally some more. T came to the rescue and ushered everyone out so that we beat the mad rush of 3 am. The group was walking in twos and threes and eventually all gathered near the aquarium. She always found it so mesmerizing and was peeking up at the top of the tank.

"Looking for Sami the Shark??" he said

She jolted for a second before smiling. "Im always looking for Sami - hes gorgeous" She had a passion for sharks.

"Thank you I will take that as the greatest of compliments"


Suddenly he burst out laughing at her confused expression. He stuck his hand out and said, "Shall we start from scratch?? Hi, my name is Sami. Im from Saudi"

"Meems. Oman" she just with a blush. She was blushing too much today for her liking.


"Meeeeemmmeeeeeee goomi - yallah lets go to za sweeming pooool"

"Jooja leave me alone - I just wanna have my coffee in peace in front of the TV"

"TV aish ya binti - you have enough TV in 3oooman. La tinsi mistar s3oodi byistanaky 3ala il sweeming pooool."

It just all came back to her. For some reason every time she spoke in front of him, she would put a foot in it. The last thing she remembered was saying that she is always looking for gorgeous Sami. How could she have a conversation with someone for an hour without bothering to check whether she knew his name or not? She dug her face into the pillow to drown out Jooja's giggles. She finally got up to get ready knowing that no guy who's been clubbing the night before will be up before 2 pm which meant they had a good few hours of girly quality time.

An hour later the girls were ba6ba6ing in the "sweeming pooool" with other friends. She liked when she heard her phone ring. She got out to answer it when she realized that the caller was insisting on letting it ring. Additionally she wasn't appreciating the dirty looks that she was getting from the holidaying Europeans that were looking for peace and quiet. She flicks her hands out to get rid of the excess water as she walks over to the sun lounger. She noticed it was a Omani number she doesn't know so she picked up.


"Hey Meems, you guys at the pool yet?" it was a voice she didn't recognize but it sounded like a guy whose been coughing for a while.

"Who is this?" she asked in which she got a little laughter and finally the answer she never expected. "How did you get my number??"

Sent from my BlackBerry® smartphone from Oman Mobile!


  1. Yallllllllllllllllah! Sami the shark hahahaha

  2. Wassup with all you girls writing stories? ;p I have to read all the other parts to understand this one!

  3. I LOVE ITTTT !!!

    post pLeeeeeeeZ :(

  4. LOve it love it love it !!

  5. 25 commeeents???
    is it okay if i write them?

  6. Um Mit3ib - LOOOOOL

    Solafa - i told u ur not allowed to ask for the next post

    Anonymous - point being??

    ..::Amu::.. - so after u read everything what do u think??

    Anonymous - thanks *blush*

    Anonymous - thanks *blush blush*

    Music, Happiness, Love - LOOOOOL la u cant write them all but u can advertise for me

    Music, Happiness, Love - sneaky!!

  7. dont leave us hanging !! :PPPP mafhamt sh9ar m3 sheild w madre wsho, a5r shay kant jooja tar6n bl faransy chan y6la3 sami out of no where??

  8. good job

    thumbs up ;)

    next post !!plz

  9. tick tock tick tock,
    we are waiting for more

  10. jooj - sheild ya3ni ehwa wagaf oo '3a6a 3aliah cos hiya kanat mit-thayga min il mda7ash. LOOOOL i dont think my story is that confusing. hahahahahah

    Lulwa - thanks

    Lulwa - same Lulwa?? anyways welcome to my blog

    Karamilah - 14 comments down, 11 to go - im getting there

  11. whooooo was the caller ?! was it her ex?
    duuude yalla next post pleeeeease =D

  12. ok,,, LOL @ sami the shark loool..

    just to add my voice to reach the number of required comments,,

    Yala fast,, wallah you always stop in the wrong place..

  13. libero anima - ana gayla mako new post lain ma i reach the minimum number of comments - ilpost jahiz tara

    Stand-Alone - the point of stopping in the "wrong" places is called keeping the viewer interested. intrigue laa otherwise nobody will come back

  14. i love ur story!!!!!....

    walla it amazing !!

  15. kilish i dont think ur post is too out there... or not for our culture! u should write whatever u c fit!!.... bes we love it and we support u all the way!

  16. Anonymous - thanks babe

    Anonymous - laish 3indi i7sas ineh ur the same person?? LOOOOL anyways this makes 20

  17. looooooool!!!!!! i am the same person!!!

    hehe tha7akteeni shloon chakayteeni!!... bes wlla 9ij i love ur blog enuf to pretend like im 5 different pple!!.. isnt that enuf to post up round 6?!?! PRETTY PLEASE?!? LOVE U;*

  18. Anony - 3ashan 5a6rich i will post part 6 tonight. LOOOL

  19. ok this is comment number 23 ..
    2 comments left to post part 6 ..

  20. whooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooow comment number 25 !!!
    yea baby
    shake it
    to the left
    now to the right

    yalaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa post 6 .. pleeeeease =D

  21. libero anima - and mine makes 24?? nope im counting them without my own comments. LOOOOL

  22. soooooooo dude ..

    this is comment 24 ..

    that means that only 1 more comment is needed !
    hmm i wonder who commentor number 25 would be ?..

  23. duuuuude that's not fair may5e9ni a comment is a comment .. wela commentaaate don't mean anything to u ;(

  24. libero anima - oh yeah and repeated comments are not allowed. LOOOOOOOOOOL

  25. libero anima - 7abibti wallah lakin shaklich u didnt read comment number 22 where i said i was going to post part 6 tonight anyways - but at least u made me feel THAT much better about myself.

    PS. inside scoop - im editing the post and will be publishing it within the next 10 minutes.

  26. libero anima - commentatich mean the world to me babe

  27. oooooh weaaaaaaaaaaaaally !!

    duuude kewl =D

  28. libero anima - on one condition - u have to become a public follower on my blog. i lost a follower today. :(

  29. aw man .. my deepest condolences ..

    hehe inshalah ill be happy to be a follower ..